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John Carpenter's

 

MacReady's Shack

by Todd Cameron


The fierce wind whipped the guideline around like a skipping rope gone insane. Nauls gripped the line with a thickly gloved hand and leaned into the howling blizzard to better keep his balance. He trudged through the snow a few steps behind MacReady. Nauls had the added weight of the gas cylinders strapped on his back but he didn't mind. The extra weight helped him keep his footing in the winter storm, besides he liked having the operational end of a flame-thrower aimed at MacReady's back. But it wasn't just the pilot, Nauls trusted him about as much as the others in the camp; he wouldn't turn his back on any of them right now for a second.

MacReady held the flare up to light the path, turning to check that Nauls was still with him. Mac's sombrero jerked around crazily on his back in the frigid gale. Nauls grimaced against the bitter cold and wondered why Mac persisted with that stupid hat. It looked ridiculous in the Antarctic; it was something a Mexican beach vendor wore. Distracted by MacReady's choice of apparel Nauls slipped on a chunk of ice and almost fell onto his knees. He quickly caught his step and cursed out but it fell on deaf ears, the winter storm whipped the sound towards the South Pole.

The two men trekked up the incline to MacReady's shack. A light shone brightly out of the solitary window like a beacon of guilt. MacReady didn't like the scenario at all. The other men in the camp would not trespass in his personal space, his domain, his 'shack'. Mac had expressed interest in the unused observation post as soon as he found it could be safely heated to a respectable temperature with the old oil furnace. No one else had the slightest interest in it and Garry had agreed to let MacReady use it as long as he didn't burn it down. Garry's only true worry was that one morning they'd find Mac frozen solid outside in a drunken attempt to come back inside the main compound.

Finding their footing up the steps to the shack's doorway was a challenge in the driving whiteout. Mac tossed away the flare as it started to die. The wind seemed to blow even harder up this slight rise, there was no protection from the elements and snow billowed off a drift at the top of the stairs. Without their snow goggles they would not have even been able to open their eyes against the blinding storm.

Mac grasped the handle and popped the door. It opened easily.

"Stay close with that torch." Mac cautioned gruffly, just loud enough for Nauls to hear over the winter gale.

Nauls stepped up pointing the flame-thrower at the shack's door and Mac swung it open. They were hit with a blast of warm air. The shack's heated interior sucked past them out into the frigid night. The gale-force storm blew throughout the small shack, reigning havoc as it tossed around papers and magazines, anything light not held down. The men stepped inside and the warmth felt good on their numbed faces. Mac struggled to get the door closed behind them sealing off the howling wind. The small room lost its heat in seconds with the door left open.

Nauls glanced around the shack. He'd only been up here once before, helping Mac carry some of his stuff up. "Anybody home?" he called out.

MacReady was glad to be back in his den. He felt safe, despite what seemed the rest of the world was in chaos outside. This was his retreat, a place to get away from the cramped, forced relationships of the camp. Nothing looked suspicious or out of place…except…

"For fuck's sakes!" MacReady barked.

Nauls spun. "What?!"

"My goddamn Chess Wizard is gone, that's what."

The cook made a face. "You freaked me out man. Who the hell is gonna steal a chess game now?"

Mac shrugged, lifting off his goggles. "I don't know. Screw it, piece of shit was broken anyway."

"You know," Nauls thought a second then added, "There's shit missing from the kitchen too. Yesterday the food processor disappeared. Other stuff too."

MacReady couldn't make sense of it. It didn't add up. Who the hell came up to his shack to steal his computerized chess game? Was Fuchs up here messing around before he was killed?

Nauls glanced around Mac's abode. It was small and sparse but he could see the pilot was quite comfortable up here. Had everything he needed. Travel posters depicting hot destinations covered the walls. A makeshift cot covered with thick blankets, some books, and magazines. Nauls eyes wandered onto a flipped through copy of Penthouse. There were a few empty bottles of Scotch kicking around. This was Mac's place to get away from it all. Like a person needed to get away from anything at the South Pole. Most of the men enjoyed others company in this desolate frozen place at the bottom of the world.

"Anything else missing?" Nauls asked.

"Actually yeah," Mac muttered, "and I don't friggin' believe it."

The supply plane had made its last pre-winter drop for Outpost #31 a few weeks ago in late May. The men were cut off from outside contact until the freezing temperatures and inclement weather of the Antarctic winter passed. They had to make due with what they had until around the first week of October. Each of the men was designated a certain amount of weight for personal items, and MacReady's was almost all taken up with a case of J&B Rare Scotch. And now it was gone.

"Somebody stole my stash. A whole bloody box full." Mac dropped onto the cot and started digging his arm under the mattress.

"You're joking?" Nauls gestured. Then sarcastically, "Well what are you going to do now Mac?"

"I don't know." MacReady was dead serious. He quit digging under the bed and got up to open a drawer in the desk. He tossed aside some books and loose paper and came out with an undiscovered bottle. Emergency back up supply. A grin came across his face. "But this will do until I find the SOB who ripped me off."

Mac eased into his chair and twisted off the cap. He took a serious slug of the alcohol, the warm liquid heating his insides like nothing else. Except maybe a hot woman and the Malibu sun. He offered the bottle in Nauls direction.

"No thanks," the cook declined. That stuff straight up would burn a hole in his gut. He was already sweating profusely under his heavy outer gear in the overly warm shack.

Mac was in no hurry to return outside or to re-face their current situation. "I'm going to have a minute with Justerini and Brooks. Do me a favor then and check the level on that oil tank. I don't want to run out up here and have this place freeze up."

"Sure man," Nauls stepped over to the oil-fired heater in the far corner of the room. "No problem." The furnace roared away and Nauls checked the setting. Mac had it set at 84 F. If Garry saw that, he'd catch shit. The interior of the camp was never warmer than 70 F and dipped down to the low 60's at night. Nauls bent to examine the fuel level indicator. Through the glass tube he saw there was just over half a tank left. Something else then caught Nauls' attention. What looked like a piece of material wedged behind the furnace. It appeared to have been stuffed back there, but the recent blast of wind from the open door had freed it up. Nauls was just about to spew off to Mac about being more careful for fire hazards when it dawned on him. He snapped his mouth shut. Out of the corner of his eye he saw that MacReady was still sitting at the desk with the bottle, going through some of his stuff.

Nauls reached out quickly and snatched the material. Luckily it came loose with an easy tug. He kept his back to MacReady and saw that his worst thoughts were confirmed. It was torn clothing. A quick search revealed it was a ripped shirt and the stenciled nametag read "MACREADY".

"Oh shit," Nauls muttered under his breath. A few silent seconds ticked by as Nauls realized what he had discovered, and worse, the corner he was in. MacReady wasn't MacReady. He was one of those Things. And Nauls was alone with him, stuck up in it's goddamn lair of all places.

Nauls later swore to himself he jumped visibly at MacReady's voice.

"So what's the verdict?"

Nauls gulped for a reply, "Huh?"

Mac was curt. "Damn it Nauls, do I need more fuel or what?"

"No you're good for another couple of weeks. Got more than a half tank left." Nauls replied as coolly as he could while fumbling with his parka zipper. As nonchalantly as possible he slipped the piece of shredded clothing inside his coat.

"Good. I hate hauling those barrels over here." Mac took another pull off the green bottle and enjoyed the numbing warmth starting to spread throughout his limbs.

Nauls silently checked the flame-thrower's igniter was on and turned to face Mac. He scanned the pilot's bearded face for a sign, any sign that would give him away. He saw nothing. Nauls made his way slowly over to the door. "We'd better get heading back... it's been almost 15 minutes since we left Windows."

"Yeah. All right." MacReady replied without much enthusiasm. He wasn't looking forward to the cold march back to the camp, but it was his own rule they meet back in 20 minutes, regardless. He gathered up some of his belongings. He debated whether or not to have another shot of the J&B, and capped the bottle thinking it might be better to have a fairly clear head right now. He stuffed it into one of his large outer pockets along with some of his personal stuff.

Nauls stood at the door watching Mac closely. One out of character twitch from this guy and Nauls was going to hit him with a burst from the flame-thrower. Nauls hadn't yet used the portable torches but he was sure he wouldn't hesitate. He had to let the others know about Mac. But how? By the time he could get the word out to someone Mac would be back inside the camp. He couldn't let that happen. MacReady, or whatever the hell looked like MacReady couldn't get back into the camp. With just seconds to come up with a plan Nauls' mind raced with ideas; burn Mac on the way back to the camp. He could just let loose with the torch and burn Mac to ashes. Nauls got queasy at the thought of burning someone alive. Fuchs' grisly corpse was still very fresh in his mind. Mac still looked and acted and sounded like Mac. It wasn't like Childs torching some abomination in the kennel. That was a monster, Mac still looked human.

But that's what it wants me to think, Nauls thought. That's not MacReady, but an imitation of him. A perfect imitation as Blair had said. Nauls heart froze as MacReady came up to him. Nauls looked into the ice blue eyes and saw... nothing.

"What's wrong?" Mac asked, but brushed the question aside. "Let's get moving. If we're not back soon we're gonna have some talking to do ourselves."

"I'm ready. Let's go." Nauls replied keeping his voice steady. Mac brushed past Nauls and hauled the door open. The cold air rushed in, sucking the heat out into the polar night. Mac struck a flare and saw that the storm had increased. The wind blew impossibly stronger, flinging ice and snow stinging hard against exposed skin. The men pulled on their goggles.

Mac set out down the stairs holding the flare high into the blowing storm. Nauls shut the door to MacReady's shack with a tug against the wind and followed Mac down the steps. He had to brace himself against the railing the wind was so strong now. His back was starting to ache from wearing the flame-thrower unit for so long.

Mac turned and had to yell to be heard over the gale.

"Hold onto the towline real tight. You don't want to get lost out here. I can't even see the camp."

Nauls nodded. "OK." He held onto the torch as tight as the guideline. Mac was right, the lights from the camp could not even be seen through the storm. Their only way back was to follow the rope into the blowing snow, trusting faithfully that it would lead them to the camp's entrance.

They set out down the trail, the wind and snow swirling around them. Nauls kept the torch aimed at MacReady's back. More than once he debated just pulling the fuel stream control and right here and now destroying Mac, or the Thing that was Mac. But if Mac was a Thing, why did he not attempt to attack Nauls in the shack? It didn't add up that way, but MacReady was the man in charge now and calling the shots, just what this monster wants to do. Mac usually kept to himself and didn't bother to 'take charge' or get involved. This was out of character for him. Nauls could feel the cold sweat dripping down his back.

If Mac got more than a few strides ahead of Nauls he started to disappear in the blizzard. Nauls kept up his pace with Mac. Then suddenly MacReady tripped up, sliding on the snow and he went down. Nauls caught up in a hurry and saw his chance. He quickly overtook Mac on the towline as the pilot was off his feet.

MacReady struggled and got up regaining his balance. "Goddamn snow... I HATE snow!"

Nauls shouted out, "Let's keep going. I'll lead now."

Mac didn't reply, still furious with falling in the snow. He set out after Nauls planning to find a nice warm spot by himself in the camp when they got back and get seriously drunk. Fuchs was dead, either by his own hand or somebody murdered him. Blair was still crazy and now they had little way of finding a test to uncover who was who. One or more of the men certainly weren't who they claimed to be. Things definitely aren't looking their best, are they, he conceded with dark humor. Mac saw that Nauls was getting far ahead on the line and disappearing in the blowing snow.

"Hey!" Mac called out. He increased his pace to catch up with Nauls, who was now just an obscured shape in the storm. Mac pulled himself forward on the line. He knew something was up with that kid. Suddenly the line gave way completely in his hand and MacReady landed flat on his back in the snow.

The flame-thrower's igniter had made quick work of the towline cord. The rope let go quickly after it burned through and the backlash almost knocked Nauls down too. He struggled to stay up and hold onto the remaining loose end of the line. Behind him through the whistling wind he could hear screaming in the night. But in the panic and adrenaline rush he couldn't tell if those were human sounds... or maybe, something else...

Nauls struck a flare and set out as fast he could for the camp.


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